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Re: [secdir] Secdir review of draft-ietf-behave-nat64-learn-analysis-03.txt

jouni korhonen <jouni.nospam@gmail.com> Thu, 12 April 2012 08:06 UTC

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Subject: Re: [secdir] Secdir review of draft-ietf-behave-nat64-learn-analysis-03.txt
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Hi,

On Apr 11, 2012, at 10:39 PM, Samuel Weiler wrote:

> On Wed, 11 Apr 2012, jouni korhonen wrote:
> 
>>> I think some Informative references to relevant documents should be inserted here in order to help readers find relevant information.
>> 
>> Will add references to RFC3315 and RFC3971.
> 
> More generally, please add informative citations to all of the docs (e.g the ones mentioned in 5.*) -- don't just give us the ID titles, actually cite them.

Ack.

- Jouni


> 
> -- Sam
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