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From: Roman Danyliw <rdd@cert.org>
To: Éric Vyncke <evyncke@cisco.com>, The IESG <iesg@ietf.org>
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Subject: Re: [Secret] Éric Vyncke's No Objection on charter-ietf-tigress-00-01: (with COMMENT)
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Hi Éric!

Thank you for the feedback.  It has been folded into 00-02.  More inline ...

> -----Original Message-----
> From: iesg <iesg-bounces@ietf.org> On Behalf Of Éric Vyncke via Datatracker
> Sent: Tuesday, June 28, 2022 2:07 AM
> To: The IESG <iesg@ietf.org>
> Cc: tigress-chairs@ietf.org; secret@ietf.org
> Subject: Éric Vyncke's No Objection on charter-ietf-tigress-00-01: (with
> COMMENT)
> 
> Éric Vyncke has entered the following ballot position for
> charter-ietf-tigress-00-01: No Objection
> 
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> The document, along with other ballot positions, can be found here:
> https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/charter-ietf-tigress/
> 
> 
> 
> ----------------------------------------------------------------------
> COMMENT:
> ----------------------------------------------------------------------
> 
> Interesting pieces of work that will be quite useful. Here are some quick
> comments:
> 
> The 1st paragraph is written using "you", I would prefer to read it as the 3rd
> person.

I can see that, but I think this might be a matter of style.  Let's see what the community review returns.
 
> 2nd paragraph, in "Note that neither private keys", the "note that" looks
> strange in a charter, suggest to replace it by "Note: neither private keys".

Changed.

> The MD format (bullet list) is broken in a couple of places.

I did my best by inserting too many CR to get bullets to break across lines.  I'm having issues with MD rendering the text to be bullets without line breaks.

> It is unclear what "sensitive details of the share" are.
> 
> The charter has privacy & security "goals" and "considerations", while I am not
> a native English speaker, I wonder those 2 words are synonyms. Should
> 'requirements' be used ?

In this case, I would consider "goals", "considerations" and "requirements" synonyms.  However, there is no reason to use all three.  The text now only uses "goals"

Roman

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