Re: FW: New Version Notification - draft-sgtatham-secsh-iutf8-05.txt

Mouse <mouse@Rodents-Montreal.ORG> Thu, 15 December 2016 06:30 UTC

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> Please find the new version of the draft and let us know if you have
> more comments.

The line break inside "I/O" in the abstract looks a bit broken.

Other than that I see nothing wrong with it offhand - well, except for
the brokenness inherent in using UTF-8 at all, which strikes me as out
of scope for the draft.

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