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Éric Vyncke has entered the following ballot position for
draft-ietf-sedate-datetime-extended-10: No Objection

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# Éric Vyncke, INT AD, comments for draft-ietf-sedate-datetime-extended-10

Thank you for the work put into this document.

Please find below some non-blocking COMMENT points (but replies would be
appreciated even if only for my own education).

Special thanks to Mark McFadden for the shepherd's detailed write-up including
the WG consensus and the justification of the intended status.

I hope that this review helps to improve the document,

Regards,

-éric

# COMMENTS

## Section 1.2 (mostly nits)

The example of New York time would benefit of adding "in the USA" and "in 2023"
(the latter would allow a better aging -- who knows ?).

Should ICAO be expanded ?

Should "San Francisco" be qualified as in "San Francisco, California" ?

## Backward compatibility

As I am not familiar with RFC 3339, I wonder whether the new syntax could break
some legacy RFC 3339 implementations (including parsing libraries). Were there
some tests ?