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Hi =C3=89ric,

thank you for this review.
The changes mentioned below are in

=
https://github.com/ietf-wg-sedate/draft-ietf-sedate-datetime-extended/pull=
/59

Gr=C3=BC=C3=9Fe, Carsten


> On 2023-10-17, at 14:15, =C3=89ric Vyncke via Datatracker =
<noreply@ietf.org> wrote:
>=20
> =C3=89ric Vyncke has entered the following ballot position for
> draft-ietf-sedate-datetime-extended-10: No Objection
> [=E2=80=A6]
>=20
> The document, along with other ballot positions, can be found here:
> https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/draft-ietf-sedate-datetime-extended/
>=20
>=20
>=20
> ----------------------------------------------------------------------
> COMMENT:
> ----------------------------------------------------------------------
>=20
> # COMMENTS
>=20
> ## Section 1.2 (mostly nits)
>=20
> The example of New York time would benefit of adding "in the USA" and =
"in 2023"
> (the latter would allow a better aging -- who knows ?).

Added.


> Should ICAO be expanded ?

This is a quotation from RFC 3339.
I added a reference after it, which carries the expansion.
(The referenced document is unfortunately behind an ICAO paywall =E2=80=94=
 trying to avoid the obvious NATO reference [1] here.)

[1]: =
https://www.nato.int/nato_static_fl2014/assets/pdf/pdf_2018_01/20180111_na=
to-alphabet-sign-signal.pdf

> Should "San Francisco" be qualified as in "San Francisco, California" =
?

The sentence would actually be true for San Francisco, Antioquia, which =
has not observed DST since 1993 (or any other San Francisco), because =
the politicians can still change the time zone, but I added this.

> ## Backward compatibility
>=20
> As I am not familiar with RFC 3339, I wonder whether the new syntax =
could break
> some legacy RFC 3339 implementations (including parsing libraries).

Any use of the new features in IXDTF *must* cause RFC 3339 =
implementations worth their salt to reject the string.
IXDTF is not in general forward compatible(*) with respect to RFC 3339 =
implementations (RFC 3339, as updated, is a proper subset of IXDTF).

* Backward compatibility =3D old data, new system.
* Forward compatibility =3D new data, old system.

>  Were there
> some tests ?

There is an implementer community that is watching, but I can=E2=80=99t =
point to any specific tests.  Do you think we need any?

Gr=C3=BC=C3=9Fe, Carsten


