Re: [sidr] WGLC: draft-ietf-sidr-rtr-keying - finishes - 10/16/2017 - Oct 16, 2017

"Borchert, Oliver (Fed)" <oliver.borchert@nist.gov> Thu, 12 October 2017 21:44 UTC

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From: "Borchert, Oliver (Fed)" <oliver.borchert@nist.gov>
To: Christopher Morrow <christopher.morrow@gmail.com>
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Subject: Re: [sidr] WGLC: draft-ietf-sidr-rtr-keying - finishes - 10/16/2017 - Oct 16, 2017
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Hi,



I  believe this draft is important. Said that, I also believe that it needs some more work before it is ready to advance to IESG review.



Sriram and I were reading the draft carefully and after some discussion, I added our findings into the document itself.

For easier reading, I added the comments as attachment in pdf form.



The main issues we identified were in sections 5, 6, and 8 of the document.



The sections 5 and 6 are not easy to understand and the flow is somewhat confusing. We propose to restructure the sections 5 and 6 into three sections,  each section having a well-defined outcome.

This makes it easier for an implementer to understand what to do and what is expected.



Also in section 8, we identified some overlapping with draft-ietf-sidrops-bgpsec-rollover-02. We propose some changes and references to mitigate the overlaps.

Once our concerns are addressed, we believe that the document should advance to IESG.



We are willing to help out in any capacity,



Thanks,

Oliver


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Subject: [sidr] WGLC: draft-ietf-sidr-rtr-keying - finishes - 10/16/2017 - Oct 16, 2017

WG Folk,
I thought I had sent this note our previously, but... better late then never sent:

Please consider this the WGLC for:
  https://tools.ietf.org/html/draft-ietf-sidr-rtr-keying-13<https://na01.safelinks.protection.outlook.com/?url=https%3A%2F%2Ftools.ietf.org%2Fhtml%2Fdraft-ietf-sidr-rtr-keying-13&data=02%7C01%7Coliver.borchert%40nist.gov%7C928c470f76354b13f98d08d50a0ce109%7C2ab5d82fd8fa4797a93e054655c61dec%7C1%7C0%7C636425972798413518&sdata=%2B4l88vCjZsKlctqmu2QGf24s%2FmhWtY2GgTSiSQm9%2FOI%3D&reserved=0>

Abstract:
  "BGPsec-speaking routers are provisioned with private keys in order to
   sign BGPsec announcements.  The corresponding public keys are
   published in the global Resource Public Key Infrastructure, enabling
   verification of BGPsec messages.  This document describes two methods
   of generating the public-private key-pairs: router-driven and
   operator-driven."

Please send along comments/complaints/issues/kudos (to the authors), to the list and I'll see you all in ~14 or so days.

Thanks!
-chris
co-chair