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Re: [sidr] AD Review of draft-ietf-sidr-bgpsec-protocol-18

"Sriram, Kotikalapudi (Fed)" <kotikalapudi.sriram@nist.gov> Sun, 27 November 2016 15:22 UTC

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From: "Sriram, Kotikalapudi (Fed)" <kotikalapudi.sriram@nist.gov>
To: "Alvaro Retana (aretana)" <aretana@cisco.com>, "draft-ietf-sidr-bgpsec-protocol@ietf.org" <draft-ietf-sidr-bgpsec-protocol@ietf.org>
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Subject: Re: [sidr] AD Review of draft-ietf-sidr-bgpsec-protocol-18
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Hi Alvaro,

Thank you very much for this thorough and detailed set of comments. 
They greatly help improve the clarity, accuracy, and presentation in the document. 
I have worked with each of the comments and incorporated changes accordingly 
in the document. Please see version-19 that was just submitted.  
Many thanks to Sean Turner for his help with the updated IANA considerations section. 
My responses to your individual comments are included in the attached pdf 
and are marked with [Sriram] and in blue.

Let me know if the pdf opens OK for you. 
Also, please let me know if I missed anything. 

Regards,
Sriram

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