[sidr] Spencer Dawkins' No Objection on draft-ietf-sidr-rfc6490-bis-04: (with COMMENT)

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draft-ietf-sidr-rfc6490-bis-04: No Objection

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COMMENT:
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Just as a nit - there are at least a couple of places in this draft, that
are unchanged from RFC 6490, that say "this document" or "this approach",
which made more sense to me looking at RFC 6490 than at a document that
will obsolete RFC 6490 (I didn't know where "this" was pointing).

If anyone else finds that confusing, the authors might want to look at
that.