Re: [sidr] I-D Action: draft-ietf-sidr-publication-10.txt

Rob Austein <sra@hactrn.net> Tue, 10 January 2017 13:54 UTC

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Updated in response to IETF Last Call comments.

Text additions here were a bit more extensive than I would normally
consider during last call, but SECDIR reviewer correctly pointed out
that there were some gaps in the background material which made it
difficult for someone who hasn't been following this for years to
understand where this protocol fits in the RPKI ecology, so the
Introduction got both some new text and a nice piece of ASCII art
(the latter kindly contributed by Randy, thanks!).

No protocol changes, just somewhat expanded explanation and fixes for
a few minor omissions (eg, "hash" attributes specified as hexadecimal
in the schema but not in the text, oops).