[sidr] Review of draft-ietf-sidr-publication-10
Peter Yee <peter@akayla.com> Tue, 17 January 2017 22:05 UTC
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Reviewer: Peter Yee Review result: Ready with Nits I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. The General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) reviews all IETF documents being processed by the IESG for the IETF Chair. Please wait for direction from your document shepherd or AD before posting a new version of the draft. For more information, please see the FAQ at <https://trac.ietf.org/trac/gen/wiki/GenArtfaq>. Document: draft-ietf-sidr-publication-10 Reviewer: Peter Yee Review Date: 2017-01-17 IETF LC End Date: 2017-01-06 IESG Telechat date: 2017-01-19 Summary: This specification defines a protocol for handling objects in an RPKI repository. Version 10 gives additional explanatory text that is helpful and fixes the nits I previously submitted. Major issues: None Minor issues: None Nits/editorial comments: Page 3, Section 1, 2nd paragraph before end of page, 2nd sentence: change "RCC" to "RFC". Page 6, Section 2.2, 3rd paragraph, 3rd sentence: delete "is" before "MUST". Page 7, 5th full paragraph: change "messages" to "message".