[sidr] Review of draft-ietf-sidr-publication-10

Peter Yee <peter@akayla.com> Tue, 17 January 2017 22:05 UTC

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Subject: [sidr] Review of draft-ietf-sidr-publication-10

Reviewer: Peter Yee
Review result: Ready with Nits

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Document: draft-ietf-sidr-publication-10
Reviewer: Peter Yee
Review Date: 2017-01-17
IETF LC End Date: 2017-01-06
IESG Telechat date: 2017-01-19

Summary: This specification defines a protocol for handling objects in
an RPKI repository.  Version 10 gives additional explanatory text that
is helpful and fixes the nits I previously submitted.

Major issues: None

Minor issues: None

Nits/editorial comments: 

Page 3, Section 1, 2nd paragraph before end of page, 2nd sentence:
change "RCC" to "RFC".

Page 6, Section 2.2, 3rd paragraph, 3rd sentence: delete "is" before
"MUST".

Page 7, 5th full paragraph: change "messages" to "message".

[sidr] Review of draft-ietf-sidr-publication-10 Peter Yee
Re: [sidr] [Gen-art] Review of draft-ietf-sidr-pu… Jari Arkko