Re: [sidr] AD Review of draft-ietf-sidr-slurm-04

Di Ma <madi@zdns.cn> Wed, 07 February 2018 01:16 UTC

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Subject: Re: [sidr] AD Review of draft-ietf-sidr-slurm-04
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Hi, Alvaro,

Thanks.

A new version (-06) has been submitted.

Di

> 在 2018年2月7日,01:48,Alvaro Retana <aretana.ietf@gmail.com> 写道:
> 
> On February 5, 2018 at 10:09:18 PM, Di Ma (madi@zdns.cn) wrote:
> 
> Di:
> 
> Hi!
> 
>> A new version (-05) has been submitted for you to review.
> 
> There’s one more change I need you to make before starting the IETF Last Call.
> 
> In this latest revision you listed rfc8211 as a Normative Reference (as a replacement of draft-ietf-sidr-adverse-actions, which was listed as Informative).  Please move rfc8211 back to Informative.  I know this sounds like a nit, but the IETF Last Call explicitly calls out DownRefs (pointing to an Informational document as a Normative Reference in a Standards Track document), which carry additional process…and in this case it is not needed.
> 
> While you’re at it, please update the reference to rfc7159 -> rfc8259.
> 
> Thanks!
> 
> Alvaro.