Re: [sidr] [Errata Held for Document Update] RFC6480 (5196)

Randy Bush <randy@psg.com> Fri, 08 December 2017 22:36 UTC

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Subject: Re: [sidr] [Errata Held for Document Update] RFC6480 (5196)
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>       3. For each manifest, verify that certificates and CRLs issued
>          under the corresponding CA certificate match the hash values
>          contained in the manifest.  Additionally, verify that no
>          certificate or CRL listed on the manifest is missing from
>          the repository.  If the hash values do not match, or if any
>          certificate or CRL is missing, notify the appropriate
>          repository administrator that the repository data has been
>          corrupted.
>
> On the fourth line: it should read "certificate or CRL" instead of
> "certificate or manifest".

while you are at it, data are plural