[Sidrops] rtgdir Last Call Review requested: draft-ietf-sidrops-https-tal

John E Drake <jdrake@juniper.net> Mon, 29 April 2019 15:35 UTC

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Hello,

I have been selected as the Routing Directorate reviewer for this draft. The Routing Directorate seeks to review all routing or routing-related drafts as they pass through IETF last call and IESG review, and sometimes on special request. The purpose of the review is to provide assistance to the Routing ADs. For more information about the Routing Directorate, please see http://trac.tools.ietf.org/area/rtg/trac/wiki/RtgDir

Although these comments are primarily for the use of the Routing ADs, it would be helpful if you could consider them along with any other IETF Last Call comments that you receive, and strive to resolve them through discussion or by updating the draft.

Document:  draft-ietf-sidrops-https-tal-07
Reviewer: John Drake
Review Date: 29-Apr-2019
IETF LC End Date: 30-Apr-2019
Intended Status: Standards Track

Summary:

No issues found. This document is ready for publication.

Comments:

The document was well structured, clear, and concise, and I found it immensely entertaining.

Major Issues:

No major issues found 

Minor Issues:

No minor issues found 

Yours Irrespectively,

John


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