From nobody Thu Jun 16 05:05:26 2022 Return-Path: X-Original-To: sidrops@ietfa.amsl.com Delivered-To: sidrops@ietfa.amsl.com Received: from localhost (localhost [127.0.0.1]) by ietfa.amsl.com (Postfix) with ESMTP id 73A01C14F741; Thu, 16 Jun 2022 05:05:24 -0700 (PDT) X-Virus-Scanned: amavisd-new at amsl.com X-Spam-Flag: NO X-Spam-Score: -2.108 X-Spam-Level: X-Spam-Status: No, score=-2.108 tagged_above=-999 required=5 tests=[BAYES_00=-1.9, DKIM_SIGNED=0.1, DKIM_VALID=-0.1, DKIM_VALID_AU=-0.1, DKIM_VALID_EF=-0.1, RCVD_IN_DNSWL_BLOCKED=0.001, SPF_HELO_NONE=0.001, SPF_PASS=-0.001, T_SCC_BODY_TEXT_LINE=-0.01, URIBL_BLOCKED=0.001] autolearn=ham autolearn_force=no Authentication-Results: ietfa.amsl.com (amavisd-new); dkim=pass (1024-bit key) header.d=eggert.org Received: from mail.ietf.org ([50.223.129.194]) by localhost (ietfa.amsl.com [127.0.0.1]) (amavisd-new, port 10024) with ESMTP id h-8rbsEw3job; Thu, 16 Jun 2022 05:05:20 -0700 (PDT) Received: from mail.eggert.org (mail.eggert.org [IPv6:2a00:ac00:4000:400:211:32ff:fe22:186f]) (using TLSv1.2 with cipher ECDHE-RSA-AES128-GCM-SHA256 (128/128 bits)) (No client certificate requested) by ietfa.amsl.com (Postfix) with ESMTPS id 1C980C14CF00; Thu, 16 Jun 2022 05:05:20 -0700 (PDT) Received: from smtpclient.apple (unknown [IPv6:2a00:ac00:4000:400:1c88:e8ae:82ba:5180]) (using TLSv1.2 with cipher ECDHE-RSA-AES256-GCM-SHA384 (256/256 bits)) (No client certificate requested) by mail.eggert.org (Postfix) with ESMTPSA id DE3041F091C; Thu, 16 Jun 2022 15:05:05 +0300 (EEST) DKIM-Signature: v=1; a=rsa-sha256; c=relaxed/simple; d=eggert.org; s=dkim; t=1655381106; bh=1cxx442iQWXtFGsRwWev1iUh7mTeL3TyaF+Z7LupHoU=; h=Subject:From:In-Reply-To:Date:Cc:References:To; b=BgoGAihi0b2Bd2UZnN5DmkcmaHjum29QPnbMHqCxk39NaJv7s9CAxDbGbE0+khzDr YX+3skf2NPzKTdnWwNNNY5Iw5SJBugVTKmW557+5PP2t4s7wyCq1WUuQpfCLYePr65 zeQL49fjl/h+pijVUhf3g9IOFzw2yubL9prxI8n0= Content-Type: multipart/signed; boundary="Apple-Mail=_9B084CCA-EF68-4F37-BFF3-75AF72B6F48A"; protocol="application/pgp-signature"; micalg=pgp-sha512 Mime-Version: 1.0 (Mac OS X Mail 16.0 \(3696.100.31\)) From: Lars Eggert In-Reply-To: <165116641483.7454.9553649083341392376@ietfa.amsl.com> Date: Thu, 16 Jun 2022 15:04:54 +0300 Cc: General Area Review Team , draft-ietf-sidrops-8210bis.all@ietf.org, last-call@ietf.org, sidrops@ietf.org Message-Id: References: <165116641483.7454.9553649083341392376@ietfa.amsl.com> To: Stewart Bryant X-MailScanner-ID: DE3041F091C.A2C5D X-MailScanner: Not scanned: please contact your Internet E-Mail Service Provider for details X-MailScanner-From: lars@eggert.org Archived-At: Subject: Re: [Sidrops] [Gen-art] Genart last call review of draft-ietf-sidrops-8210bis-06 X-BeenThere: sidrops@ietf.org X-Mailman-Version: 2.1.39 Precedence: list List-Id: A list for the SIDR Operations WG List-Unsubscribe: , List-Archive: List-Post: List-Help: List-Subscribe: , X-List-Received-Date: Thu, 16 Jun 2022 12:05:24 -0000 --Apple-Mail=_9B084CCA-EF68-4F37-BFF3-75AF72B6F48A Content-Transfer-Encoding: quoted-printable Content-Type: text/plain; charset=us-ascii Stewart, thank you for your review. I have entered a No Objection ballot = for this document. Lars > On 2022-4-28, at 20:20, Stewart Bryant via Datatracker = wrote: >=20 > Reviewer: Stewart Bryant > Review result: Ready with Issues >=20 > I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. The General Area > Review Team (Gen-ART) reviews all IETF documents being processed > by the IESG for the IETF Chair. Please treat these comments just > like any other last call comments. >=20 > For more information, please see the FAQ at >=20 > . >=20 > Document: draft-ietf-sidrops-8210bis-06 > Reviewer: Stewart Bryant > Review Date: 2022-04-28 > IETF LC End Date: 2022-04-29 > IESG Telechat date: Not scheduled for a telechat >=20 > Summary: I read this from a GenArt perspective rather than a routing > perspective, and from that viewpoint the only issues that need = addressing are > the matter of the obsolete RFCs that are called up without reference = to their > status and any necessary mitigations. Once this matter is addressed = the draft > is ready for publication. >=20 > Major issues: None >=20 > Minor issues: > =3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D > Nits fulls up three errors: >=20 > ** Obsolete normative reference: RFC 2385 (Obsoleted by RFC 5925) > ** Obsolete normative reference: RFC 5246 (Obsoleted by RFC 8446) > ** Obsolete normative reference: RFC 8208 (Obsoleted by RFC 8608) >=20 > The first is covered by an explanation in the text of the draft, but = the other > two are not. >=20 > I am not sure what the right what the technology and deployment issues = are in > moving the the newer RFCs, but there is not text as far as I can see = noting the > obsolete nature of RFC5246 or RFC8208, nor any comment on their = replacement by > RFC8446 and RFC8608 respectively. > =3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D >=20 > Nits/editorial comments: None >=20 >=20 >=20 > _______________________________________________ > Gen-art mailing list > Gen-art@ietf.org > https://www.ietf.org/mailman/listinfo/gen-art --Apple-Mail=_9B084CCA-EF68-4F37-BFF3-75AF72B6F48A Content-Transfer-Encoding: 7bit Content-Disposition: attachment; filename=signature.asc Content-Type: application/pgp-signature; name=signature.asc Content-Description: Message signed with OpenPGP -----BEGIN PGP SIGNATURE----- iQIzBAEBCgAdFiEEmpq0ZpSoejRmyhheVLXDCb9wwVcFAmKrHGYACgkQVLXDCb9w wVc17RAA1HhApgrXwzuGG0dgXhGIDy2Ez2mclOUPbW67a5CL/PmyNsW2FHJc9KRU NfVbgI7Nh9ua+fOWnZW7fcGME5OLBIpvoz7e/7GVQptTZX7Vt3QLtkgL7wSHwk8V 43pq4k9fO3/oLC4cXaBM8a/8xLquRalIFSRUq0dIhXmeQvkEm9suJ8TUMvp3lwFT ZawS+fAtN7986xCqEDPg5faSsLZ9o1GeSmGTovDhSO1uqvOMbJLSALQO9GzWzPnR GBUxxOr5Pad9MpztcWKHVR2Yqg+1V+GiJ0UwaPhzouAcAYDe6DgL3M0GCEvkx+CS WkueFqrUQ/hRAmaEHdcc3sK6Tl1nhaq24YGwGV2W5S/BppOwBLa5ITO42vsUiYPa Szf6lV7kR5GS4rWBxGbse71xrrF5BZcLC364BxnpGcUqITdtu+bmSuZXRPqEOehF BfeEdzjzqiJ5A1V4OPEY68RBjQjyOHXk3DOcMkDvNO6cZl8VpUUfiE+wL1VywH6p zea38/ufE3KJoIgsMA8KnztFYE7eqE2SvHcyYPF1lTrIVywkaiC96gGZrtJf8pfB /Ke8Jz/MvKYXxfhIAsQ7XpahxjdTYQHSPuz7ib7lgx+QA8nBMwHqT0QDeD6BBi2d u28RXajjhPGnoV2fw+fbeOLz/K9/rKvRCMSWAfEm0v2iBbxfVT4= =9VWg -----END PGP SIGNATURE----- --Apple-Mail=_9B084CCA-EF68-4F37-BFF3-75AF72B6F48A--