Re: [Sidrops] Adam Roach's No Objection on draft-ietf-sidrops-lta-use-cases-05: (with COMMENT)

Barry Leiba <barryleiba@computer.org> Tue, 30 April 2019 13:36 UTC

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Subject: Re: [Sidrops] Adam Roach's No Objection on draft-ietf-sidrops-lta-use-cases-05: (with COMMENT)
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>   ** The document seems to lack a both a reference to RFC 2119 and the
>      recommended RFC 2119 boilerplate, even if it appears to use RFC 2119
>      keywords.
>
>      RFC 2119 keyword, line 177: '...eds.  Hence they MUST be implemented t...'
>
> Please consider adding the boilerplate specified in RFC 8174.

Or, alternatively (and my preference), re-word that brief paragraph in
the Security Considerations so that it doesn't use "MUST".  I find
"Hence they MUST be implemented to assure the local constraint." hard
to understand anyway, so re-wording might help.

Barry