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Re: [Sidrops] WGLC: draft-ietf-sidrops-rtr-keying - ENDS: 10/31/2018 (halloscream!)

Christopher Morrow <christopher.morrow@gmail.com> Tue, 06 November 2018 03:17 UTC

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Date: Tue, 06 Nov 2018 14:17:09 +1100
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Subject: Re: [Sidrops] WGLC: draft-ietf-sidrops-rtr-keying - ENDS: 10/31/2018 (halloscream!)
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On Tue, Nov 6, 2018 at 2:06 PM Christopher Morrow <
christopher.morrow@gmail.com> wrote:

>
>
> On Tue, Nov 6, 2018 at 3:43 AM Sriram, Kotikalapudi (Fed) <
> kotikalapudi.sriram@nist.gov> wrote:
>
>> Sorry for the delay. I have read the document and support moving it
>> forward.
>>
>> I have the following editorial suggestions:
>>
>> (1) Shouldn’t RFC8205 be a normative reference?
>>
>> (2) s/[RFC8205] describes gritty details/[RFC8205] describes the BGPsec
>> protocol/
>>
>> (3) The following substitution:
>>
>> Old (at the top of p.5):
>> Therefore,
>>    the operator transmits the AS it has chosen or the router and the BGP
>>    Identifier as well when it sends the CSR to the CA.
>>
>> New:
>> Therefore,
>>    the operator includes the chosen AS number and the BGP
>>    Identifier when it sends the CSR to the CA.
>>
>> The above sentence appears three times on p.5. So,please make them at
>> least consistent with each other.
>>
>> Thank you.
>> Sriram
>>
>>
> thanks! these seem like sane changes... which we can drop in  edit-buffer
> for revision post-iesg discussion, I think?
>
>

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