Re: [Sidrops] WG Adoption call for draft-borchert-sidrops-bgpsec-validation-signaling-01 (9/16-9/30)

"Sriram, Kotikalapudi (Fed)" <kotikalapudi.sriram@nist.gov> Fri, 20 September 2019 13:18 UTC

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From: "Sriram, Kotikalapudi (Fed)" <kotikalapudi.sriram@nist.gov>
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Subject: Re: [Sidrops] WG Adoption call for draft-borchert-sidrops-bgpsec-validation-signaling-01 (9/16-9/30)
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I have read the draft and will be happy to assist with review and discussion.
I support adoption.

Nits:
Top of Section 3:
s/The origin validation state/The BGPsec validation state/

Section 4:
s/router SHOULD apply the validation state
   "unverified" and perform BGPsec path validation ... /
s/router SHOULD temporarily apply the validation state
   "unverified" and perform BGPsec path validation ... /

s/as lined out in Section 3/as outlined in Section 3/
or  s/as lined out in Section 3/as described in Section 3/

Sriram