Re: [Sidrops] Murray Kucherawy's No Objection on draft-ietf-sidrops-rp-06: (with COMMENT)

Di Ma <madi@zdns.cn> Fri, 10 April 2020 06:36 UTC

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Subject: Re: [Sidrops] Murray Kucherawy's No Objection on draft-ietf-sidrops-rp-06: (with COMMENT)
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Murray,

Thanks for your review.

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> COMMENT:
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> 
> Section 4.3:
> 
> “A Manifest can be classified as either valid or invalid, and a valid Manifest
> is either current and stale.”
> 
> That should be “...or stale”, right?
> 
Good catch.

It should be "or" here.

Di