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> This sentence reads slightly awkard, feels like a loose end:
>     "A session is not [re-]established, but data learned need not be deleted."
> perhaps:
>     "A session is not yet [re-]established, any previously learned data
>      need not be flushed for the time remaining in the Expire Interval."

thanks

how about

    A session is not [re-]established, but data previously learned need
    not be flushed.

no need to complicate by draging in expiry.

randy

