[Sidrops] Genart last call review of draft-ietf-sidrops-ov-clarify-03

Brian Carpenter <brian.e.carpenter@gmail.com> Tue, 31 July 2018 01:31 UTC

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From: Brian Carpenter <brian.e.carpenter@gmail.com>
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Date: Mon, 30 Jul 2018 18:31:55 -0700
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Subject: [Sidrops] Genart last call review of draft-ietf-sidrops-ov-clarify-03

Reviewer: Brian Carpenter
Review result: Ready with Nits

Gen-ART Last Call review of draft-ietf-sidrops-ov-clarify-03

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Document: draft-ietf-sidrops-ov-clarify-03.txt
Reviewer: Brian Carpenter
Review Date: 2018-07-31
IETF LC End Date: 2018-08-10
IESG Telechat date: 

Summary: Ready
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Comments: Clear & easy to understand
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Nits:
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Title would be more searchworthy if it read "BGP-4 Origin Validation Clarifications"

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[Sidrops] Genart last call review of draft-ietf-s… Brian Carpenter
Re: [Sidrops] Genart last call review of draft-ie… Brian E Carpenter
Re: [Sidrops] [Gen-art] Genart last call review o… Alissa Cooper