[Sidrops] Artart last call review of draft-ietf-sidrops-rpkimaxlen-11

Jean Mahoney via Datatracker <noreply@ietf.org> Wed, 20 July 2022 13:12 UTC

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Date: Wed, 20 Jul 2022 06:12:08 -0700
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Subject: [Sidrops] Artart last call review of draft-ietf-sidrops-rpkimaxlen-11

Reviewer: Jean Mahoney
Review result: Ready with Nits

I found the draft to be easy to read, and it is ready with just one small issue:

The 2119 boilerplate needs to be updated to include RFC 8174, and a normative
reference to that RFC needs to be added. (I see the Doc Shepherd review also
mentions this.)

Nits:

   s/ad-hoc/ad hoc

   Title of Section 5.2 should be headline capitalized.

   There are a few places where there's a comma before "because". Those commas
   should be removed.

Thanks!
Jean

[Sidrops] Artart last call review of draft-ietf-s… Jean Mahoney via Datatracker
Re: [Sidrops] Artart last call review of draft-ie… Ben Maddison