Re: [Simple] [Editorial Errata Reported] RFC5438 (3850)

Richard Barnes <rlb@ipv.sx> Fri, 27 December 2013 17:42 UTC

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Cc: Ben Campbell <ben@nostrum.com>, simple@ietf.org, Khartabil Hisham <hisham.khartabil@gmail.com>, RFC Errata System <rfc-editor@rfc-editor.org>, niket.kumar@intel.com
Subject: Re: [Simple] [Editorial Errata Reported] RFC5438 (3850)
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Thanks, Eric.  I have marked this as Verified.


On Thu, Dec 26, 2013 at 8:17 AM, Eric Burger <eburger@standardstrack.com>wrote:

> WFM. Good catch. Thanks.
>
> On Dec 26, 2013, at 3:59 AM, RFC Errata System <rfc-editor@rfc-editor.org>;
> wrote:
>
> > The following errata report has been submitted for RFC5438,
> > "Instant Message Disposition Notification (IMDN)".
> >
> > --------------------------------------
> > You may review the report below and at:
> > http://www.rfc-editor.org/errata_search.php?rfc=5438&eid=3850
> >
> > --------------------------------------
> > Type: Editorial
> > Reported by: Niket Kumar <niket.kumar@intel.com>;
> >
> > Section: 8.3
> >
> > Original Text
> > -------------
> >   The aggregated IMDN is constructed using the multipart/mixed MIME
> >
> >   type and including as individual payloads all the IMDNS that were
> >
> >   received as message/imdn+xml.
> >
> >
> >
> >   Below is an example of aggregated IMDNs.
> >
> >
> >
> >   From: Bob <im:bob@example.com>
> >
> >   To: Alice <im:alice@example.com>
> >
> >   NS: imdn <urn:ietf:params:imdn>
> >
> >   imdn.Message-ID: d834jied93rf
> >
> >   Content-type: multipart/mixed;
> >
> >                      boundary="imdn-boundary"
> >
> >   Content-Disposition: notification
> >
> >   Content-length: ...
> >
> >
> >
> >   --imdn-boundary
> >
> >   Content-type: message/imdn+xml
> >
> >
> >
> >   <?xml version="1.0" encoding="UTF-8"?>
> >
> >   <imdn xmlns="urn:ietf:params:xml:ns:imdn">
> >
> >         <message-id>34jk324j</message-id>
> >
> >         <datetime>2008-04-04T12:16:49-05:00</datetime>
> >
> >        <recipient-uri>im:bob@example.com</recipient-uri>
> >
> >         <original-recipient-uri
> >
> >> im:bob@example.com</original-recipient-uri>
> >
> >         <delivery-notification>
> >
> >            <status>
> >
> >               <delivered/>
> >
> >            </status>
> >
> >         </delivery-notification>
> >
> >       </imdn>
> >
> >
> >
> >   --imdn-boundary
> >
> >   Content-type: message/imdn+xml
> >
> >
> >
> >   <?xml version="1.0" encoding="UTF-8"?>
> >
> >   <imdn xmlns="urn:ietf:params:xml:ns:imdn">
> >
> >         <message-id>34jk324j</message-id>
> >
> >         <datetime>2008-04-04T12:16:49-05:00</datetime>
> >
> >        <recipient-uri>im:bob@example.com</recipient-uri>
> >
> >         <original-recipient-uri
> >
> >> im:bob@example.com</original-recipient-uri>
> >
> >         <display-notification>
> >
> >            <status>
> >
> >               <displayed/>
> >
> >            </status>
> >
> >         </display-notification>
> >
> >       </imdn>
> >
> >
> >
> >   --imdn-boundary
> >
> >
> >
> > Corrected Text
> > --------------
> >   The aggregated IMDN is constructed using the multipart/mixed MIME
> >
> >   type and including as individual payloads all the IMDNS that were
> >
> >   received as message/imdn+xml.
> >
> >
> >
> >   Below is an example of aggregated IMDNs.
> >
> >
> >
> >   From: Bob <im:bob@example.com>
> >
> >   To: Alice <im:alice@example.com>
> >
> >   NS: imdn <urn:ietf:params:imdn>
> >
> >   imdn.Message-ID: d834jied93rf
> >
> >   Content-type: multipart/mixed;
> >
> >                      boundary="imdn-boundary"
> >
> >   Content-Disposition: notification
> >
> >   Content-length: ...
> >
> >
> >
> >   --imdn-boundary
> >
> >   Content-type: message/imdn+xml
> >
> >
> >
> >   <?xml version="1.0" encoding="UTF-8"?>
> >
> >   <imdn xmlns="urn:ietf:params:xml:ns:imdn">
> >
> >         <message-id>34jk324j</message-id>
> >
> >         <datetime>2008-04-04T12:16:49-05:00</datetime>
> >
> >        <recipient-uri>im:bob@example.com</recipient-uri>
> >
> >         <original-recipient-uri
> >
> >> im:bob@example.com</original-recipient-uri>
> >
> >         <delivery-notification>
> >
> >            <status>
> >
> >               <delivered/>
> >
> >            </status>
> >
> >         </delivery-notification>
> >
> >       </imdn>
> >
> >
> >
> >   --imdn-boundary
> >
> >   Content-type: message/imdn+xml
> >
> >
> >
> >   <?xml version="1.0" encoding="UTF-8"?>
> >
> >   <imdn xmlns="urn:ietf:params:xml:ns:imdn">
> >
> >         <message-id>34jk324j</message-id>
> >
> >         <datetime>2008-04-04T12:16:49-05:00</datetime>
> >
> >        <recipient-uri>im:bob@example.com</recipient-uri>
> >
> >         <original-recipient-uri
> >
> >> im:bob@example.com</original-recipient-uri>
> >
> >         <display-notification>
> >
> >            <status>
> >
> >               <displayed/>
> >
> >            </status>
> >
> >         </display-notification>
> >
> >       </imdn>
> >
> >
> >
> >   --imdn-boundary--
> >
> >
> >
> > Notes
> > -----
> > The last multipart MIME boundary should have a "--" at the end. In the
> above example it should be "--imdn-boundary--" instead of "--imdn-boundary"
> >
> > Instructions:
> > -------------
> > This errata is currently posted as "Reported". If necessary, please
> > use "Reply All" to discuss whether it should be verified or
> > rejected. When a decision is reached, the verifying party (IESG)
> > can log in to change the status and edit the report, if necessary.
> >
> > --------------------------------------
> > RFC5438 (draft-ietf-simple-imdn-10)
> > --------------------------------------
> > Title               : Instant Message Disposition Notification (IMDN)
> > Publication Date    : February 2009
> > Author(s)           : E. Burger, H. Khartabil
> > Category            : PROPOSED STANDARD
> > Source              : SIP for Instant Messaging and Presence Leveraging
> Extensions
> > Area                : Real-time Applications and Infrastructure
> > Stream              : IETF
> > Verifying Party     : IESG
>
>