Re: [Simple] I-D Action: draft-ietf-simple-chat-17.txt
"Miguel A. Garcia" <Miguel.A.Garcia@ericsson.com> Tue, 20 November 2012 11:24 UTC
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Subject: Re: [Simple] I-D Action: draft-ietf-simple-chat-17.txt
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Hi Paul, Thanks for your comments. See inline answers. On 19/11/2012 17:10, Paul Kyzivat wrote: > AFAICT, this draft has addressed all the concerns I previously raised. > In looking through it, I came across some small editorial issues: > > Figure 1, near the bottom, has a dangling "|". > fixed. > In section 4.1: > > Nicknames: Whether the chat room accepts users to be recognized > with a nickname. See Section 7, Section 7.1, and Section 8 for > details. Also, the scope of uniqueness of the nickname: the chat > room (conference instance), a real or domain, a server, etc. > > Something is wrong in the last sentence - "a real" *what*? It should say "a realm or domain". > > Section 5.2: s/The chat room them uses/The chat room then uses/ fixed. > > Section 6.2: in the last paragraph, at the end, s/URI.m/URI./ Fixed. /Miguel > > Thanks, > Paul > > On 11/17/12 11:30 AM, Miguel A. Garcia wrote: >> Hi: >> >> So, the long awaited version -17 of the MSRP chat draft has been posted. >> This version addresses all the comments received in the IESG review and >> various directorates that also took a look at the draft. Among others, >> these are the most relevant changes. >> >> - Added definitions of "identifier" and "to log in". >> - New Section 4.1 lists all the Policy Attributes of the chat room in a >> single section. >> - Clarified that congestion can occur due to the chat room application >> or due to some other application. >> - Clarified that the MSRP switch should learn the recipient's >> capabilities through the 'accept-wrapped-types' in SDP. Procedures as >> for what to do if the MSRP switch is aware that a recipient does not >> support a given media type. >> - Quite a few clarifications around chunked messages. It was clarified >> when the MSRP switch has to delete the temporarily stored state. Also, >> how to deal with situations where the connection is broken before the >> reception of the last chunk. >> - Added a length limit to MSRP nicknames: they must be between 1 and >> 1023 octets, after UTF-8 encoding. >> - Fixed a bug: the error result code is 425 rather than 423 in the >> examples. >> - Added more security considerations around the usage of TLS, policies >> to preserve a nickname once the use logs off, confusable nicknames, >> rendering of nicknames that contain scripts or code, and anonymity when >> using TLS with certificates. >> >> From the authors' perspective, we believe the draft is ready. I will >> contact the IESG members to verify that the current version satisfies >> their comments. >> >> /Miguel >> >> On 17/11/2012 17:06, internet-drafts@ietf.org wrote: >>> >>> A New Internet-Draft is available from the on-line Internet-Drafts >>> directories. >>> This draft is a work item of the SIP for Instant Messaging and >>> Presence Leveraging Extensions Working Group of the IETF. >>> >>> Title : Multi-party Chat Using the Message Session Relay >>> Protocol (MSRP) >>> Author(s) : Aki Niemi >>> Miguel A. Garcia-Martin >>> Geir A. Sandbakken >>> Filename : draft-ietf-simple-chat-17.txt >>> Pages : 42 >>> Date : 2012-11-17 >>> >>> Abstract: >>> The Message Session Relay Protocol (MSRP) defines a mechanism for >>> sending instant messages within a peer-to-peer session, negotiated >>> using the Session Initiation Protocol (SIP) and the Session >>> Description Protocol (SDP). This document defines the necessary >>> tools for establishing multi-party chat sessions, or chat rooms, >>> using MSRP. >>> >>> >>> The IETF datatracker status page for this draft is: >>> https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/draft-ietf-simple-chat >>> >>> There's also a htmlized version available at: >>> http://tools.ietf.org/html/draft-ietf-simple-chat-17 >>> >>> A diff from the previous version is available at: >>> http://www.ietf.org/rfcdiff?url2=draft-ietf-simple-chat-17 >>> >>> >>> Internet-Drafts are also available by anonymous FTP at: >>> ftp://ftp.ietf.org/internet-drafts/ >>> >>> _______________________________________________ >>> Simple mailing list >>> Simple@ietf.org >>> https://www.ietf.org/mailman/listinfo/simple >>> >>> >> > > _______________________________________________ > Simple mailing list > Simple@ietf.org > https://www.ietf.org/mailman/listinfo/simple > -- Miguel A. Garcia +34-91-339-3608 Ericsson Spain
- Re: [Simple] I-D Action: draft-ietf-simple-chat-1… Paul Kyzivat
- Re: [Simple] I-D Action: draft-ietf-simple-chat-1… Ben Campbell
- Re: [Simple] I-D Action: draft-ietf-simple-chat-1… Paul Kyzivat
- [Simple] I-D Action: draft-ietf-simple-chat-17.txt internet-drafts
- Re: [Simple] I-D Action: draft-ietf-simple-chat-1… Miguel A. Garcia
- Re: [Simple] I-D Action: draft-ietf-simple-chat-1… Miguel A. Garcia
- Re: [Simple] I-D Action: draft-ietf-simple-chat-1… Miguel A. Garcia
- Re: [Simple] I-D Action: draft-ietf-simple-chat-1… Ben Campbell
- [Simple] Fwd: I-D Action: draft-ietf-simple-chat-… Ben Campbell
- Re: [Simple] I-D Action: draft-ietf-simple-chat-1… Miguel A. Garcia
- Re: [Simple] I-D Action: draft-ietf-simple-chat-1… Ben Campbell
- Re: [Simple] I-D Action: draft-ietf-simple-chat-1… Saúl Ibarra Corretgé