[Simple] [Editorial Errata Reported] RFC5438 (3850)

RFC Errata System <rfc-editor@rfc-editor.org> Thu, 26 December 2013 08:59 UTC

To: eburger@standardstrack.com, hisham.khartabil@gmail.com, rlb@ipv.sx, gonzalo.camarillo@ericsson.com, hisham.khartabil@gmail.com, ben@nostrum.com
From: RFC Errata System <rfc-editor@rfc-editor.org>
Message-Id: <20131226085903.554AB7FC37E@rfc-editor.org>
Date: Thu, 26 Dec 2013 00:59:00 -0800
Cc: rfc-editor@rfc-editor.org, simple@ietf.org, niket.kumar@intel.com
Subject: [Simple] [Editorial Errata Reported] RFC5438 (3850)
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The following errata report has been submitted for RFC5438,
"Instant Message Disposition Notification (IMDN)".

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You may review the report below and at:
http://www.rfc-editor.org/errata_search.php?rfc=5438&eid=3850

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Type: Editorial
Reported by: Niket Kumar <niket.kumar@intel.com>

Section: 8.3

Original Text
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   The aggregated IMDN is constructed using the multipart/mixed MIME
   type and including as individual payloads all the IMDNS that were
   received as message/imdn+xml.

   Below is an example of aggregated IMDNs.

   From: Bob <im:bob@example.com>
   To: Alice <im:alice@example.com>
   NS: imdn <urn:ietf:params:imdn>
   imdn.Message-ID: d834jied93rf
   Content-type: multipart/mixed;
                      boundary="imdn-boundary"
   Content-Disposition: notification
   Content-length: ...

   --imdn-boundary
   Content-type: message/imdn+xml

   <?xml version="1.0" encoding="UTF-8"?>
   <imdn xmlns="urn:ietf:params:xml:ns:imdn">
         <message-id>34jk324j</message-id>
         <datetime>2008-04-04T12:16:49-05:00</datetime>
        <recipient-uri>im:bob@example.com</recipient-uri>
         <original-recipient-uri
           >im:bob@example.com</original-recipient-uri>
         <delivery-notification>
            <status>
               <delivered/>
            </status>
         </delivery-notification>
       </imdn>

   --imdn-boundary
   Content-type: message/imdn+xml

   <?xml version="1.0" encoding="UTF-8"?>
   <imdn xmlns="urn:ietf:params:xml:ns:imdn">
         <message-id>34jk324j</message-id>
         <datetime>2008-04-04T12:16:49-05:00</datetime>
        <recipient-uri>im:bob@example.com</recipient-uri>
         <original-recipient-uri
            >im:bob@example.com</original-recipient-uri>
         <display-notification>
            <status>
               <displayed/>
            </status>
         </display-notification>
       </imdn>

   --imdn-boundary


Corrected Text
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   The aggregated IMDN is constructed using the multipart/mixed MIME
   type and including as individual payloads all the IMDNS that were
   received as message/imdn+xml.

   Below is an example of aggregated IMDNs.

   From: Bob <im:bob@example.com>
   To: Alice <im:alice@example.com>
   NS: imdn <urn:ietf:params:imdn>
   imdn.Message-ID: d834jied93rf
   Content-type: multipart/mixed;
                      boundary="imdn-boundary"
   Content-Disposition: notification
   Content-length: ...

   --imdn-boundary
   Content-type: message/imdn+xml

   <?xml version="1.0" encoding="UTF-8"?>
   <imdn xmlns="urn:ietf:params:xml:ns:imdn">
         <message-id>34jk324j</message-id>
         <datetime>2008-04-04T12:16:49-05:00</datetime>
        <recipient-uri>im:bob@example.com</recipient-uri>
         <original-recipient-uri
           >im:bob@example.com</original-recipient-uri>
         <delivery-notification>
            <status>
               <delivered/>
            </status>
         </delivery-notification>
       </imdn>

   --imdn-boundary
   Content-type: message/imdn+xml

   <?xml version="1.0" encoding="UTF-8"?>
   <imdn xmlns="urn:ietf:params:xml:ns:imdn">
         <message-id>34jk324j</message-id>
         <datetime>2008-04-04T12:16:49-05:00</datetime>
        <recipient-uri>im:bob@example.com</recipient-uri>
         <original-recipient-uri
            >im:bob@example.com</original-recipient-uri>
         <display-notification>
            <status>
               <displayed/>
            </status>
         </display-notification>
       </imdn>

   --imdn-boundary--


Notes
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The last multipart MIME boundary should have a "--" at the end. In the above example it should be "--imdn-boundary--" instead of "--imdn-boundary"

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RFC5438 (draft-ietf-simple-imdn-10)
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Title               : Instant Message Disposition Notification (IMDN)
Publication Date    : February 2009
Author(s)           : E. Burger, H. Khartabil
Category            : PROPOSED STANDARD
Source              : SIP for Instant Messaging and Presence Leveraging Extensions
Area                : Real-time Applications and Infrastructure
Stream              : IETF
Verifying Party     : IESG

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Re: [Simple] [Editorial Errata Reported] RFC5438 … Eric Burger
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Re: [Simple] [Editorial Errata Reported] RFC5438 … Richard Barnes