[sip-clf] Updated draft-ietf-sipclf-problem-statement-09

"Vijay K. Gurbani" <vkg@bell-labs.com> Tue, 06 December 2011 19:28 UTC

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Subject: [sip-clf] Updated draft-ietf-sipclf-problem-statement-09
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Folks: I have addressed the last set of nits Robert identified in
[1].  The new version (-09) is in the IETF archives [2], and
the diffs against -08 are at [3].

More specifically, (a) "Framework and Data Model" added as a subtitle,
(b) text suggested by Robert incorporated in page 12, (c) the timing
nits identified by Robert has been fixed.

[1] http://www.ietf.org/mail-archive/web/sip-clf/current/msg00517.html
[2] http://www.ietf.org/id/draft-ietf-sipclf-problem-statement-09.txt
[3] 
http://tools.ietf.org/rfcdiff?url2=draft-ietf-sipclf-problem-statement-09

Thanks,

- vijay
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