[sip-overload] Introduction - "This document defines..." Re: WG Last Call for draft-ietf-soc-overload-control-12

OK, finally getting to this.

In section 1, the last paragraph ("this document defines...") seems to 
miss the main point, which is a protocol for COMMUNICATING overload 
information.

Therefore, I would suggest changing

 "  This document defines the general behaviour of SIP servers and
   clients involved in overload control in Section 5.  In addition,
   Section 6 specifies a loss-based overload control scheme.  SIP
   clients and servers conformant to this specification MUST implement
   the loss-based overload control scheme.  They MAY implement other
   overload control schemes as well."

to

"   This document defines the protocol for communicating overload
   information between SIP servers and clients, so that clients can reduce
   the volume of traffic sent to overloaded servers, avoiding congestion
   collapse, and increasing usefull throughput. Section 4 describes the
   Via header parameters used for this communication.  The general
   behaviour of SIP servers and clients involved in overload control
  is described in Section 5.  In addition,
   Section 6 specifies a loss-based overload control scheme.  SIP
   clients and servers conformant to this specification MUST implement
   the loss-based overload control scheme.  They MAY implement other
   overload control schemes as well."

Janet

From:   Salvatore Loreto <salvatore.loreto@ericsson.com>
To:     "sip-overload@ietf.org" <sip-overload@ietf.org>
Cc:     Volker Hilt <volker.hilt@alcatel-lucent.com>
Date:   02/11/2013 02:35 AM
Subject:        Re: [sip-overload] WG Last Call for 
draft-ietf-soc-overload-control-12
Sent by:        sip-overload-bounces@ietf.org

this is just a reminder for this WG Last Call

I haven't seen yet any comment or feedback 
please we really need you spend some time to reading and reviewing the 
draft

thanks a lot
Salvatore

On 2/5/13 3:34 PM, Salvatore Loreto wrote:
Dear WG partecipants, 

Volker and I would like to initiate a second 2 weeks WG Last Call on 
draft-ietf-soc-overload-control-12 (" Session Initiation Protocol (SIP) 
Overload Control") 
http://tools.ietf.org/id/draft-ietf-soc-overload-control-12.txt

The first WGLC that we run ( 
http://www.ietf.org/mail-archive/web/sip-overload/current/msg00731.html )
has produced a significant amount of feedback and comments that have been 
discussed and addressed in subsequent versions

Please send your reviews, as well as expression of support regarding 
document readiness for IESG (or not) either to the *soc* mailing list (
sip-overload@ietf.org), 
or directly to the WG chairs (Murray Kucherawy and myself). 

Comments like "I've read the document and it is Ok to publish" or 
"I've read the document and it has the following issues"
are useful and would be gratefully accepted by chairs. 

The WG LC will end on Friday, February 19th. 

Thank you, 
Salvatore as an SoC co-chair. 

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