[Sip] [Editorial Errata Reported] RFC5479 (2120)

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Subject: [Sip] [Editorial Errata Reported] RFC5479 (2120)
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The following errata report has been submitted for RFC5479,
"Requirements and Analysis of Media Security Management Protocols".

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You may review the report below and at:
http://www.rfc-editor.org/errata_search.php?rfc=5479&eid=2120

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Type: Editorial
Reported by: Alfred Hoenes <ah@TR-Sys.de>

Section: 4.4,3rd para

Original Text
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|  A typical case of using media security where two entities are having
   a Voice over IP (VoIP) conversation over IP-capable networks.
   [...]

Corrected Text
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|  A typical case of using media security is where two entities are
   having a Voice over IP (VoIP) conversation over IP-capable networks.
   [...]

Notes
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Rationale: missing verb.

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RFC5479 (draft-ietf-sip-media-security-requirements-09)
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Title               : Requirements and Analysis of Media Security Management Protocols
Publication Date    : April 2009
Author(s)           : D. Wing, Ed., S. Fries, H. Tschofenig, F. Audet
Category            : INFORMATIONAL
Source              : Session Initiation Protocol
Area                : Real-time Applications and Infrastructure
Stream              : IETF
Verifying Party     : IESG