[Sipbrandy] Alissa Cooper's Yes on draft-ietf-sipbrandy-rtpsec-07: (with COMMENT)

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Alissa Cooper has entered the following ballot position for
draft-ietf-sipbrandy-rtpsec-07: Yes

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COMMENT:
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Very glad to see this work coming to a close.

= Section 3.2 =

OLD
Work is already underway on defining approaches to opportunistic media security
for SIP in [I-D.johnston-dispatch-osrtp]

NEW
At the time of this writing, work was underway to define approaches to
opportunistic media security for SIP in [draft-ietf-sipbrandy-osrtp]

= Section 4 =

s/at the endpoint obtain/at the endpoint to obtain/

= Section 5 =

Please update the OSRTP citation to point to draft-ietf-sipbrandy-osrtp.

= Section 10 =

Presumably "PASSporT Type registry" should say "PASSporT Resource Priority
Header (rph) Types registry."