[sipcore] draft-ietf-sipcore-rfc4244bis-callflows-07: comments
Brett Tate <brett@broadsoft.com> Tue, 22 October 2013 11:49 UTC
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Subject: [sipcore] draft-ietf-sipcore-rfc4244bis-callflows-07: comments
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Hi, The following are a few comments concerning draft-ietf-sipcore-rfc4244bis-callflows-07. Thanks, Brett ------- Global comment: "Max-Forward:" should be "Max-Forwards:". Section 3.2: 1) Figure 2: If not intentional, the ACK for the 302 is not shown. 2) F4: The Max-Forward (assuming Max-Forwards) should not be within the response. 3) F4: To tag should be added for RFC 3261 compliance. 4) The F numbering should match the Figure 2. 5) Second F5: Based upon second F4, the "received=192.0.2.101" should be "received=192.0.2.3". This email is intended solely for the person or entity to which it is addressed and may contain confidential and/or privileged information. If you are not the intended recipient and have received this email in error, please notify BroadSoft, Inc. immediately by replying to this message, and destroy all copies of this message, along with any attachment, prior to reading, distributing or copying it.