Re: [sipcore] I-D Action:draft-ietf-sipcore-location-conveyance-08.txt

[as document shepherd]

Thanks for your attention to detail, John.

I am making the formal request for publication of this document shortly. 
I would request that the document authors address this typo at the same 
time as they address IETF last call comments or AD feedback. If the 
document requires no other changes during IETF and IESG evaluation, 
we'll pick the change up during AUTH48.

/a

On 5/20/11 1:04 AM, Elwell, John wrote:
> No real preference, but perhaps the latter.
>
> John
>
>> -----Original Message-----
>> From: James M. Polk [mailto:jmpolk@cisco.com]
>> Sent: 19 May 2011 23:32
>> To: Elwell, John; sipcore@ietf.org
>> Subject: Re: [sipcore] I-D
>> Action:draft-ietf-sipcore-location-conveyance-08.txt
>>
>> At 01:30 AM 5/19/2011, Elwell, John wrote:
>>> This addresses my concern with the previous version.
>>>
>>> I just noticed a nit (which need not prevent this version being
>>> shipped - it can be fixed later):
>>>
>>> In 4.6:
>>> "The "geolocation-http" option tag signals support for acquiring
>>>     location information via an HTTP ([RFC2616])."
>> oops
>>
>>> Presumably this should say either "via HTTP" or "via an HTTP
>> request".
>>
>> either will work. Do you have a preference?
>>
>>
>>> An identical case occurs in 8.3.
>> not surprised by this
>>
>> Thanks for the catch
>>
>> James
>>
>>
>>> John
>>>
>>>
>>>> -----Original Message-----
>>>> From: sipcore-bounces@ietf.org
>>>> [mailto:sipcore-bounces@ietf.org] On Behalf Of
>>>> Internet-Drafts@ietf.org
>>>> Sent: 18 May 2011 22:00
>>>> To: i-d-announce@ietf.org
>>>> Cc: sipcore@ietf.org
>>>> Subject: [sipcore] I-D
>>>> Action:draft-ietf-sipcore-location-conveyance-08.txt
>>>>
>>>> A New Internet-Draft is available from the on-line
>>>> Internet-Drafts directories.
>>>> This draft is a work item of the Session Initiation Protocol
>>>> Core Working Group of the IETF.
>>>>
>>>>
>>>>        Title           : Location Conveyance for the Session
>>>> Initiation Protocol
>>>>        Author(s)       : J. Polk, et al.
>>>>        Filename        :
>> draft-ietf-sipcore-location-conveyance-08.txt
>>>>        Pages           : 30
>>>>        Date            : 2011-05-18
>>>>
>>>> This document defines an extension to the Session Initiation
>>>> Protocol (SIP) to convey geographic location information from one
>>>> SIP entity to another SIP entity.  The SIP extension covers
>>>> end-to-end conveyance as well as location-based routing, where SIP
>>>> intermediaries make routing decisions based upon the
>> location of the
>>>> Location Target.
>>>>
>>>> A URL for this Internet-Draft is:
>>>> http://www.ietf.org/internet-drafts/draft-ietf-sipcore-locatio
>>> n-conveyance-08.txt
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