Re: [sipcore] I-D Action:draft-ietf-sipcore-location-conveyance-08.txt

["Elwell, John" <[e-mail]>]

This addresses my concern with the previous version.

I just noticed a nit (which need not prevent this version being shipped - it can be fixed later):

In 4.6:
"The "geolocation-http" option tag signals support for acquiring 
   location information via an HTTP ([RFC2616])." 
Presumably this should say either "via HTTP" or "via an HTTP request".

An identical case occurs in 8.3.

John


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> This draft is a work item of the Session Initiation Protocol 
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> 	Title           : Location Conveyance for the Session 
> Initiation Protocol
> 	Author(s)       : J. Polk, et al.
> 	Filename        : draft-ietf-sipcore-location-conveyance-08.txt
> 	Pages           : 30
> 	Date            : 2011-05-18
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> This document defines an extension to the Session Initiation 
> Protocol (SIP) to convey geographic location information from one 
> SIP entity to another SIP entity.  The SIP extension covers 
> end-to-end conveyance as well as location-based routing, where SIP 
> intermediaries make routing decisions based upon the location of the
> Location Target.
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