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Re: [siprec] AD evaluation: draft-ietf-siprec-callflows-07

"Ram Mohan R (rmohanr)" <rmohanr@cisco.com> Mon, 24 October 2016 05:22 UTC

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From: "Ram Mohan R (rmohanr)" <rmohanr@cisco.com>
To: Alissa Cooper <alissa@cooperw.in>, "siprec@ietf.org" <siprec@ietf.org>
Thread-Topic: [siprec] AD evaluation: draft-ietf-siprec-callflows-07
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Thanks Alissa. Will take care of these nits.

Regards,
Ram

-----Original Message-----
From: siprec <siprec-bounces@ietf.org> on behalf of Alissa Cooper
<alissa@cooperw.in>
Date: Monday, 24 October 2016 at 6:14 AM
To: "siprec@ietf.org" <siprec@ietf.org>
Subject: [siprec] AD evaluation: draft-ietf-siprec-callflows-07

>I have reviewed this draft in preparation for IETF last call. I believe
>it is ready for LC and will issue the request to start LC shortly. Below
>are some nits that should be resolved together with any last call
>comments:
>
>= Section 3 =
>
>s/sub-sections has/sub-sections have/
>
>"In all these use-cases, the SRC is a B2BUA." --> But then you go on to
>talk about examples where the SRC is a UA. I think this sentence should
>be deleted. 
>
>= Section 3.1 =
>
>The figure should have a caption.
>
>s/may be a endpoint/may be an endpoint/
>
>s/Special flows like Turret flows/Special flows like Turret flows (used
>on financial trading floors to manage call activity)./
>
>= Section 3.3.2 =
>
>s/Bob puts Alice hold/Bob puts Alice on hold/
>
>
>Thanks,
>Alissa
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