Re: [Slim] Proposed 5.4 text

Gunnar Hellström <gunnar.hellstrom@omnitor.se> Wed, 22 November 2017 06:53 UTC

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Subject: Re: [Slim] Proposed 5.4 text
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Randall,

1. You dropped one sentence from the first paragraph in my latest proposal:

"A non-sign language tag with video media is interpreted as a view of a
  speaking person."

It was a result of the previous discussion and reasoning, and I think it 
should be reinserted.

2. You also changed the title proposal from " 5.4 Media, Language and 
Modality indications" to "5.4 Usage Notes"

I think it is better to have a title that tells about the topic of the 
paragraph. I suggest to use the title I proposed, but I can accept yours 
if you have a good reason for the change.

Thanks,

Gunnar


Den 2017-11-22 kl. 03:17, skrev Bernard Aboba:
> Looks good to me.
>
> On Tue, Nov 21, 2017 at 3:17 PM, Randall Gellens 
> <rg+ietf@randy.pensive.org <mailto:rg+ietf@randy.pensive.org>> wrote:
>
>     I agree. I made a few minor editorial changes (e.g., moving some
>     text to a new paragraph):
>
>     5.4.  Usage Notes
>
>        A sign language tag with a video media stream is interpreted as an
>        indication for sign language in the video stream.  A non-sign
>        language tag with a text media stream is interpreted as an
>        indication for written language in the text stream.  A non-sign
>        language tag with an audio media stream is interpreted as an
>        indication for spoken language in the audio stream.
>
>        This document does not define any other use for language tags in
>        video media (such as how to indicate visible captions in the video
>        stream).
>
>        In the IANA registry of language subtags per BCP 47 [RFC5646], a
>        language subtag with a Type field "extlang" combined with a Prefix
>        field value "sgn" indicates a sign language tag.  The absense of
>        such "sgn" prefix indicates a non-sign language tag.
>
>        This document does not define the use of sign language tags in text
>        or audio media.
>
>        This document does not define the use of language tags in media
>        other than interactive streams of audio, video, and text (such as
>        "message" or "application").  Such use could be supported by future
>        work or by application agreement.
>
>
>     At 11:50 PM +0100 11/21/17, Gunnar Hellström wrote:
>
>          Den 2017-11-21 kl. 23:08, skrev Randall Gellens:
>
>              Based on the text and comments from Gunnar, brian, Paul,
>             and Bernard, here is what I propose to replace section 5.4
>             with:
>
>              5.4. Usage Notes
>
>              A sign language tag with a video stream is interpreted as an
>              indication for sign language in the video stream. A non-sign
>              language tag with text media is interpreted as an
>             indication for
>              written language. A non-sign language tag with audio media is
>              interpreted as an indication for spoken language.
>
>              In the IANA registry of language subtags per BCP 47
>             [RFC5646], a
>              language subtag with a Type field "extlang" combined with
>             a Prefix
>              field value "sgn" indicates a sign language tag. The
>             absense of
>              such "sgn" prefix indicates a non-sign language tag. This
>             document
>              does not define any other use for language tags in video
>             media
>              (such as how to indicate visible captions).
>
>              This document does not define the use of sign language
>             tags in text
>              or audio media.
>
>              This document does not define the use of language tags in
>             media
>              other than interactive streams of audio, video, and text
>             (such as
>              "message" or "application").
>
>          <GH> Good, I hope that "non-sign language" can be an accepted
>         term.
>          I provide a slightly modified 5.4 proposal, with a bit more
>         consistent language in the first paragraph, and the mentioning
>         of further work or application agreement reinserted. I think
>         that is better than just saying that it is not defined. I also
>         added the spoken language in video is a view of a speaker
>         according to recent discussion in another mail.
>          I really hope to find that we are converging now.
>
>          ------------------------------new text
>         -------------------------------------------
>          5.4 Media, Language and Modality indications
>
>          A sign language tag with video media is interpreted as an
>          indication for sign language in the video stream. A non-sign
>          language tag with text media is interpreted as an indication for
>          written language. A non-sign language tag with audio media is
>          interpreted as an indication for spoken language. A non-sign
>          language tag with video media is interpreted as a view of a
>          speaking person. This document does not define any other
>          use for language tags in video media (such as how to indicate
>          visible captions in the video stream).
>
>          In the IANA registry of language subtags per BCP 47 [RFC5646], a
>          language subtag with a Type field "extlang" combined with a
>         Prefix
>          field value "sgn" indicates a sign language tag. The absense of
>          such "sgn" prefix indicates a non-sign language tag.
>
>          This document does not define the use of sign language tags
>         in text
>          or audio media. This document does not define the use of
>         language tags in media
>          other than interactive streams of audio, video, and text (such as
>          "message" or "application"). Such use may be supported by
>         further work
>          or application specific agreements.
>
>
>         ---------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------
>          Gunnar
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