Re: [Slim] Announcement of SLIM WG Last Call on draft-ietf-slim-negotiating-human-language-18

Randall Gellens <rg+ietf@randy.pensive.org> Tue, 28 November 2017 13:18 UTC

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At 11:04 PM +0100 11/23/17, Gunnar Hellström wrote:

>  I have reviewed the draft and find it acceptable.
>
>  I found a small editorial error, and have a 
> proposal for another editorial change.
>
>  --First change---------Section 6.1, 8th line -----------------
>
>  -------Old text--------------------------------------
>      hlang-value =  Language-Tag *( SP Language-tag )
>  ------New text----------------------------------------
>      hlang-value =  Language-Tag *( SP Language-Tag )
>  -----------------------------------------------^-----
>   ------End of first change-----------------------------------------

Thanks for spotting this.


>  ------Second change-------------------------------
>  I suggest to add Addison Phillips to the acknowledgement chapter 11.
>  ------End of change proposals-------------------

Agreed, thank you.


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