Re: [Slim] Announcement of SLIM WG Last Call on draft-ietf-slim-negotiating-human-language-18

Gunnar Hellström <gunnar.hellstrom@omnitor.se> Thu, 23 November 2017 22:04 UTC

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Subject: Re: [Slim] Announcement of SLIM WG Last Call on draft-ietf-slim-negotiating-human-language-18
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I have reviewed the draft and find it acceptable.

I found a small editorial error, and have a proposal for another 
editorial change.

--First change---------Section 6.1, 8th line -----------------

-------Old text--------------------------------------
     hlang-value =  Language-Tag *( SP Language-tag )
------New text----------------------------------------
     hlang-value =  Language-Tag *( SP Language-Tag )
-----------------------------------------------^-----

------End of first change-----------------------------------------
------Second change-------------------------------
I suggest to add Addison Phillips to the acknowledgement chapter 11.
------End of change proposals-------------------

Regards

Gunnar

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Den 2017-11-22 kl. 08:28, skrev Bernard Aboba:
> This is an announcement of SLIM WG Last Call on 
> draft-ietf-slim-negotiating-human-language-18.  The draft is available 
> for inspection here:
> https://tools.ietf.org/html/draft-ietf-slim-negotiating-human-language-18
>
> Since this document has already been through a WG last call as well as 
> an IETF last call and considerable WG discussion, this final WG last 
> call will last for a week.
>
> Please post your last comments to the SLIM WG mailing list by November 
> 30, 2017.
>
> The SLIM WG also requests that participants disclose IPR relating to 
> draft-ietf-slim-negotiating-human-language-18 by November 30, 2017.
>
>
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