Re: [Slim] Updated version addresses comments received so far

[Randall Gellens <[e-mail]>]

Oops, I accidently uploaded the wrong file as -21.  So, -22 is 
uploaded and has the changes.  Sorry.

At 8:43 AM -0800 1/9/18, Randall Gellens wrote:

>  Version -21 is uploaded, which deletes 5.1 and a sentence about the 
> offer/answer model.  I believe this resolves all comments.
>
>  --Randall
>
>  At 4:48 PM -0800 1/8/18, Randall Gellens wrote:
>
>>   Hi Alvaro, Paul, Eric, Mirja,
>>
>>   I uploaded version -20, which contains the text changes as 
>> discussed in email in response to your comments.  For convenience, 
>> here is a link to the diff:
>>
>>
>> 
>> https://www.ietf.org/rfcdiff?url1=draft-ietf-slim-negotiating-human-language-19&url2=draft-ietf-slim-negotiating-human-language-20
>>
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