[Slim] Updated version addresses comments received so far

Randall Gellens <rg+ietf@randy.pensive.org> Tue, 09 January 2018 00:49 UTC

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Hi Alvaro, Paul, Eric, Mirja,

I uploaded version -20, which contains the text changes as discussed 
in email in response to your comments.  For convenience, here is a 
link to the diff:

https://www.ietf.org/rfcdiff?url1=draft-ietf-slim-negotiating-human-language-19&url2=draft-ietf-slim-negotiating-human-language-20

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