[Softwires] Ben Campbell's No Objection on draft-ietf-softwire-dslite-yang-15: (with COMMENT)

Ben Campbell <ben@nostrum.com> Wed, 23 May 2018 17:17 UTC

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Date: Wed, 23 May 2018 10:17:53 -0700
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Subject: [Softwires] Ben Campbell's No Objection on draft-ietf-softwire-dslite-yang-15: (with COMMENT)

Ben Campbell has entered the following ballot position for
draft-ietf-softwire-dslite-yang-15: No Objection

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COMMENT:
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This is well-written overall, but I was confused by the RFC editor note after
the abstract. I assume you mean for these updates to be done on matching text
throughout the document, but I originally read it to mean update the text in
the note itself, which is labeled for deletion.

[Softwires] Ben Campbell's No Objection on draft-… Ben Campbell
Re: [Softwires] Ben Campbell's No Objection on dr… mohamed.boucadair