[Softwires] [Editorial Errata Reported] RFC7599 (8063)

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The following errata report has been submitted for RFC7599,
"Mapping of Address and Port using Translation (MAP-T)".

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You may review the report below and at:
https://www.rfc-editor.org/errata/eid8063

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Type: Editorial
Reported by: Scott Freemire <dsfreemire@freemire.net>

Section: 5

Original Text
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The MAP-T algorithmic mapping rules are identical to those in
Section 5(link #1) of the MAP-E specification [RFC7597](link #2), with the following
exception: the forwarding of traffic to and from IPv4 destinations
outside a MAP-T domain is to be performed as described in this
document, instead of Section 5.4(link #3) of the MAP-E specification.

link #1: https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/html/rfc7599#section-5
link #2: https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/html/rfc7597
link #3: https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/html/rfc7599#section-5.4

Corrected Text
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The MAP-T algorithmic mapping rules are identical to those in
Section 5(link #1) of the MAP-E specification [RFC7597](link #2), with the following
exception: the forwarding of traffic to and from IPv4 destinations
outside a MAP-T domain is to be performed as described in this
document, instead of Section 5.4(link #3) of the MAP-E specification.

link #1: https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/html/rfc7597#section-5
link #2: https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/html/rfc7597
link #3: https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/html/rfc7597#section-5.4

Notes
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The text in section 5 is correct, but 2 of the URL links are incorrect.
All links in section 5 should point to RFC7597.

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RFC7599 (draft-ietf-softwire-map-t-08)
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Title               : Mapping of Address and Port using Translation (MAP-T)
Publication Date    : July 2015
Author(s)           : X. Li, C. Bao, W. Dec, Ed., O. Troan, S. Matsushima, T. Murakami
Category            : PROPOSED STANDARD
Source              : Softwires
Stream              : IETF
Verifying Party     : IESG