Re: [Softwires] Revision 02

Ole Troan <ot@cisco.com> Mon, 05 December 2011 12:19 UTC

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Leaf,

thanks for your comments, I will incorporate those together with the comments received by Xing Li.

> The new draft (-02) is more readable to me than before, but it still sounds not complete yet. 

what do you think isn't complete? I didn't see that reflected in your comments.

> The attached is my copy revisions after the quick reading, just for your reference to the progress of the text.
> If there is anything shows my understanding is wrong or not perfect, pls. feel free to indicate.

Best regards,
Ole


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> 
> Best Regards,
> Leaf
> 
> 
> -----Original Message-----
> From: Xing Li [mailto:xing@cernet.edu.cn] 
> Sent: Saturday, December 03, 2011 12:29 PM
> To: Ole Troan
> Cc: map-dt@external.cisco.com team; softwires
> Subject: Re: Revision 02
> 
> Hi, Ole,
> 
> Thank you very much for your work. Attached please find our additional comments and suggestions for draft-mdt-softwire-mapping-address-and-port-02
> 
> Regards,
> 
> xing, congxiao
> 
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> <draft-mdt-softwire-mapping-address-and-port-02-Leaf-C-1112.pdf>