Re: [Softwires] Alissa Cooper's No Objection on draft-ietf-softwire-mesh-multicast-23: (with COMMENT)

" 杨术 " <yangshu@oudmon.com> Sun, 02 June 2019 15:30 UTC

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Subject: Re: [Softwires] Alissa Cooper's No Objection on draft-ietf-softwire-mesh-multicast-23: (with COMMENT)
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Dear Alissa, 


Thank you for your helpful comment, we reply as following, 


> NEW
> Fragmentation and tunnel configuration considerations are provided in [RFC4459]
> and [I-D.ietf-intarea-tunnels].


Based on your comment, and comments from Joe, 


> However, it cites RFC 5565, which cites RFC4459. That's where
> the only trouble lies - 4459 is incorrect, as noted in
> draft-ietf-intarea-tunnels. I might suggest they continue to cite RFC
> 5565 but indicate that the requirements for tunneling are under current
> revision and cite draft-ietf-intarea-tunnel (at least informationally) too.



We changed the text to be "Fragmentation and tunnel configuration
considerations are provided in [RFC5565] and [I-D.ietf-intarea-tunnels]."


Best Regards,


Shu Yang




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From:  "Alissa Cooper"<alissa@cooperw.in>perw.in>;
Date:  Thu, Sep 27, 2018 07:25 AM
To:  "The IESG"<iesg@ietf.org>etf.org>; 
Cc:  "softwires"<softwires@ietf.org>res@ietf.org>; "draft-ietf-softwire-mesh-multicast"<draft-ietf-softwire-mesh-multicast@ietf.org>ast@ietf.org>; "softwire-chairs"<softwire-chairs@ietf.org>irs@ietf.org>; 
Subject:  [Softwires] Alissa Cooper's No Objection on draft-ietf-softwire-mesh-multicast-23: (with COMMENT)

 

Alissa Cooper has entered the following ballot position for
draft-ietf-softwire-mesh-multicast-23: No Objection

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COMMENT:
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Building off of Mirja's comment and the Gen-ART review, I have a specific
suggestion for Sec. 7.3:

OLD
The specific requirements for
   fragmentation and tunnel configuration COULD be referred to in
   [I-D.ietf-intarea-tunnels], which is under revision currently.

NEW
Fragmentation and tunnel configuration considerations are provided in [RFC4459]
and [I-D.ietf-intarea-tunnels].


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