[Softwires] Adam Roach's No Objection on draft-ietf-softwire-map-mib-12: (with COMMENT)

Adam Roach <adam@nostrum.com> Tue, 22 May 2018 03:08 UTC

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Subject: [Softwires] Adam Roach's No Objection on draft-ietf-softwire-map-mib-12: (with COMMENT)

Adam Roach has entered the following ballot position for
draft-ietf-softwire-map-mib-12: No Objection

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COMMENT:
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Thank you for a clearly written document. I have some very editorial corrections
to suggest.

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§4.1.2:

>  invalid packets that have been identified.  There are two kind of

"...two kinds..."

>  - The Border Relay (BR) will validates the received packet's source

"...will validate..."

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§5:

>      DESCRIPTION
>          "Indicates that the PSID is represented as hexidecimal for
>           clarity."

"...hexadecimal..."
       ^

[Softwires] Adam Roach's No Objection on draft-ie… Adam Roach
Re: [Softwires] Adam Roach's No Objection on draf… Yu Fu