Re: [Softwires] WGLC For draft-ietf-softwire-mesh-multicast - Please respond by 23rd March

<mohamed.boucadair@orange.com> Thu, 16 March 2017 15:58 UTC

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Subject: Re: [Softwires] WGLC For draft-ietf-softwire-mesh-multicast - Please respond by 23rd March
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Hi Ian, all,

The comments I have about this document are the following:

* Instead of (re)specifying the behavior it would be more appropriate to refer to draft-ietf-softwire-dslite-multicast (RFC8114) when it makes sense (e.g., AFBR behavior, address mapping, CP, DP, etc.). 

* The document says the following:

   The mPrefix46 for SSM mode is also defined in Section 4.1 of
   [RFC7371]

This is not true. RFC7371 is about flag bits not MPREFIX64. 

Instead of referring to RFC7371, adding a pointer to Section 5 of draft-ietf-softwire-dslite-multicast would make sense. 

Cheers,
Med

> -----Message d'origine-----
> De : Softwires [mailto:softwires-bounces@ietf.org] De la part de Ian
> Farrer
> Envoyé : jeudi 9 mars 2017 17:22
> À : Softwires-wg
> Objet : [Softwires] WGLC For draft-ietf-softwire-mesh-multicast - Please
> respond by 23rd March
> 
> Hi,
> 
> The authors of draft-ietf-softwire-mesh-multicast-15 believe this document
> is ready for advancement. We would like to issue a two week working group
> last call finishing on 23rd March.
> 
> Please send any substantive comments to the list and express your opinion
> on whether this draft is ready for publication. You are also welcome to
> send your editorial comments directly to the authors.
> 
> Thanks,
> Yong & Ian
> 
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