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Re: [Softwires] draft-ietf-softwire-dslite-deployment

"Lee, Yiu" <Yiu_Lee@Cable.Comcast.com> Tue, 15 November 2011 05:56 UTC

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From: "Lee, Yiu" <Yiu_Lee@Cable.Comcast.com>
To: Nejc Škoberne <nejc@skoberne.net>, "draft-ietf-softwire-dslite-deployment@tools.ietf.org" <draft-ietf-softwire-dslite-deployment@tools.ietf.org>
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Hi Nejc,

Thanks so much for the review. The PDF format works very well. We will
make the changes according to your suggestion in the next revision.

Thanks,
Yiu

On 11/14/11 4:15 PM, "Nejc Škoberne" <nejc@skoberne.net> wrote:

>Dear authors,
>
>I volunteered yesterday at the Softwires IETF 82 meeting to be one of
>the reviewers of your draft. I reviewed it and I am sending the link
>to the PDF which includes all the proposed changes and my comments. I
>also tried to address some typos and grammar mistakes, but I since I
>am not a native speaker, some of those fixes could be wrong too.
>
>I hope you don't mind the PDF format of the review, it just seemed to
>be the easiest way for me to do this.
>
>http://nejc.skoberne.net/transfer/dslite-deployment-comments.pdf
>http://dl.dropbox.com/u/1104483/dslite-deployment-comments.pdf (backup
>link)
>
>Regards,
>Nejc
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