Re: [Softwires] Adam Roach's No Objection on draft-ietf-softwire-map-mib-12: (with COMMENT)

"Yu Fu" <fuyu@cnnic.cn> Tue, 22 May 2018 06:57 UTC

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From: Yu Fu <fuyu@cnnic.cn>
To: 'Adam Roach' <adam@nostrum.com>, 'The IESG' <iesg@ietf.org>
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Subject: Re: [Softwires] Adam Roach's No Objection on draft-ietf-softwire-map-mib-12: (with COMMENT)
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Hi Adam,

Thank you for your kind review.
We will update these editorial comments in the next version.

Cheers

Yu

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>From: softwires-bounces@ietf.org [mailto:softwires-bounces@ietf.org] On
>Behalf Of Adam Roach
>Sent: Tuesday, May 22, 2018 11:08 AM
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>Cc: softwires@ietf.org; draft-ietf-softwire-map-mib@ietf.org;
>cuiyong@tsinghua.edu.cn; softwire-chairs@ietf.org
>Subject: [Softwires] Adam Roach's No Objection on
>draft-ietf-softwire-map-mib-12: (with COMMENT)
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>Adam Roach has entered the following ballot position for
>draft-ietf-softwire-map-mib-12: No Objection
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>COMMENT:
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>Thank you for a clearly written document. I have some very editorial
>corrections to suggest.
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>§4.1.2:
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>  invalid packets that have been identified.  There are two kind of
>
>"...two kinds..."
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>  - The Border Relay (BR) will validates the received packet's source
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>"...will validate..."
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>§5:
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>      DESCRIPTION
>          "Indicates that the PSID is represented as hexidecimal for
>           clarity."
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>"...hexadecimal..."
>       ^
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