Re: [Softwires] Call for reviewers draft-ietf-softwire-mesh-multicast

"Lishan Li" <lilishan48@126.com> Sun, 17 April 2016 14:02 UTC

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Dear All,


I have reviewed the mesh multicast draft. In general, I think that this document is mature enough to move forward. 
Some minor mistakes of the draft:
1. In section 1 1. Introduction, there is no hyperlink for RFC4925;
2. In section 3.2 IPv6-over-IPv4, "IPv6 - to - IPv4 address mapping" should be "IPv6-to-IPv4 address mapping".




Best Regards,
Lishan
At 2016-04-07 22:58:40, "Ian Farrer" <ianfarrer@gmx.com> wrote:
>Hi,
>
>This document has been around for some time, but has not received any substantive reviews. Can I ask for volunteers who are willing to provide reviews?
>
>Thanks,
>Ian
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