[Softwires] Ben Campbell's No Objection on draft-ietf-softwire-mesh-multicast-23: (with COMMENT)

Ben Campbell <ben@nostrum.com> Wed, 26 September 2018 21:38 UTC

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Subject: [Softwires] Ben Campbell's No Objection on draft-ietf-softwire-mesh-multicast-23: (with COMMENT)
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Ben Campbell has entered the following ballot position for
draft-ietf-softwire-mesh-multicast-23: No Objection

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§2: Please use the boilerplate from RFC 8174.

§10: "... the security concerns SHOULD be considered more carefully...":

That seems more a statement of fact than a normative requirement. I suggest
changing the "SHOULD" to "should".