Re: [Softwires] New Version Notification for draft-fsc-softwire-dhcp4o6-saddr-opt-00.txt

Qi Sun <sunqi.csnet.thu@gmail.com> Mon, 18 August 2014 02:47 UTC

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Hi Linda,

Please see inline.

Thanks,
Qi

On Aug 15, 2014, at 3:46 PM, wang.cui1@zte.com.cn wrote:

> Hi Ian, 
> 
>   Thanks for your explaination. Now I get the main purpose and I really guess it would be better 
> understood if you can put your words below in the new version of this draft :) 

[Qi] We will do some rewording to make it clearer. 

> 
>   And now I guess this draft may be the companion draft of a new draft about how to synchronise 
> the binding table in the border router. Am I right? 

[Qi] This draft is scoped for communicating the bound v6 address to the DHCP 4o6 Server. The synchronisation process is handled in http://tools.ietf.org/html/draft-liu-softwire-lw4over6-dhcp-deployment-04#section-4.5 . 

> 
>   What's more, here are some editorial errors as follow, it would be better if they can be revised. 
>   Section 5.1:  cipv6-hintlen or cipv6-boundlen ? cipv6-prefix-hint or cipv6-bound-prefix? 

[Qi] Thanks for pointing it out. Should be: cipv6-hintlen/cipv6-prefix-hint.

Thanks for comments~

>   
>   Nothing else. 
> 
>   Thanks a lot. 
> 
> BRs, 
> Linda Wang 
> 
> 
> <ian.farrer@telekom.de> 写于 2014-08-14 16:00:18:
> 
> > <ian.farrer@telekom.de> 
> > 2014-08-14 16:00 
> > 
> > 收件人 
> > 
> > <wang.cui1@zte.com.cn>, <sunqi.csnet.thu@gmail.com>, 
> > 
> > 抄送 
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> > <softwires@ietf.org> 
> > 
> > 主题 
> > 
> > Re: [Softwires] New Version Notification for draft-fsc-softwire-
> > dhcp4o6-saddr-opt-00.txt 
> > 
> > Hi Linda, 
> > 
> > Please see below. 
> > 
> > Thanks, 
> > Ian 
> > 
> > Qi, 
> > 
> >   That's exactly what I want to express. Now it's addressed. Thanks.
> > 
> >   Here, I have another question: some content in section 1: 
> > 
> >    The service provider can then
> >   use this binding information to provision other functional elements
> >   in their network accordingly (such as the border router). 
> > 
> > What would be provisioned by using this binding information?
> > 
> > And also, I am not very sure that I have gotten the true purpose of 
> > this solution. If you can elaborate more details, it would be much 
> > more better. 
> > 
> > [ian] For lw4o6 (and other A+P based softwire mechanisms), the 
> > provisioning system for client softwire configuration and the 
> > softwire border router (lwAFTR) have to be completely aligned so 
> > that traffic can be correctly routed. 
> > 
> > If you have dynamic IP address leasing, as is possible with 
> > DHCPv4o6, then the border router has to be updated with the current 
> > client address leases and also the IPv6 addresses that are being 
> > used as tunnel endpoints. 
> > 
> > As the DHCPv4o6 server is managing the address leasing, this draft 
> > provides a way that it can also store the IPv6 address that it’s 
> > clients will use for building their softwire tunnels meaning that 
> > there is a single point in the network storing this information. 
> > This information will then be used to synchronise the binding table 
> > in the border router, although how this is done isn’t in the scope 
> > of this draft. 
> > 
> > http://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/draft-liu-softwire-lw4over6-dhcp-deployment
> > / describes the overall architecture in more details.