Re: [Softwires] WGLC for draft-ietf-softwire-dslite-mib-07

Yong Cui <cuiyong@tsinghua.edu.cn> Sat, 14 March 2015 02:34 UTC

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Subject: Re: [Softwires] WGLC for draft-ietf-softwire-dslite-mib-07
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Hi authors,

We would like to advance the document.
Would you please update your document according to the following "Check nits" report once the submission system opens? I found there are still some issues in your new version draft-ietf-softwire-dslite-mib-08.

http://www.ietf.org/tools/idnits?url=http://www.ietf.org/archive/id/draft-ietf-softwire-dslite-mib-08.txt

I would also need to receive the confirmation to the chairs from each of your authors on the IPR issue:
Has each author confirmed that any and all appropriate IPR disclosures required for full conformance with the provisions of BCP 78 and BCP 79 have already been filed. If not, explain why?

Thanks in advance,

Yong

On 2015-2-9, at 上午10:44, Fuyu (Eleven) <eleven.fuyu@huawei.com> wrote:

> Hi Tom 
> 
> Yes. I have updated the DS-Lite MIB based on draft-perrault-behave-natv2-mib. 
> Your review and comments will be very appreciated.
> 
> Thanks
> 
> BR
> Yu
> 
> -----Original Message-----
> From: Softwires [mailto:softwires-bounces@ietf.org] On Behalf Of Tom Taylor
> Sent: Friday, February 06, 2015 5:34 AM
> To: Yong Cui; softwires@ietf.org
> Subject: Re: [Softwires] WGLC for draft-ietf-softwire-dslite-mib-07
> 
> I finally got around to looking at this document, but I see I'm a bit late. In any event, I believe the authors are updating it based on the fact that [I-D.ietf-behave-nat-mib] is being replaced by draft-perrault-behave-natv2-mib. I will be happy to review the updated draft, because coordination between the two drafts is clearly required.
> 
> Tom Taylor
> 
> On 21/01/2015 7:05 AM, Yong Cui wrote:
>> Hi folks,
>> 
>> This message starts a two week softwire working group last call on 
>> advancing the draft of DS-Lite MIB as a Standards Track RFC.
>> 
>> After we had the first wglc on draft-ietf-softwire-dslite-mib-02,
>> there were some major comments. The authors have revised the document 
>> including the structure and detailed technical contents.
>> Now the authors believe that this version has addressed all the 
>> issues.
>> 
>> The latest version of the draft is available at:
>> http://www.ietf.org/id/draft-ietf-softwire-dslite-mib-07.txt
>> 
>> Substantive comments and statements of support/opposition for 
>> advancing this document should be directed to the mailing list.
>> Editorial suggestions can be sent directly to the authors. This last 
>> call will conclude on February 3, 2015.
>> 
>> 
>> Thanks,
>> 
>> Yong & Suresh
>> 
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