Re: [Softwires] I-D Action: draft-ietf-softwire-map-08.txt

Hi Satoru,

Provisioning-related discussion should be included in the unified CPE not in each individual document. This is true for MAP, lw4o6, etc.
Ensuring a coherency among ongoing specification documents will require a coordination effort among existing documents.

Cheers,
Med

De : Satoru Matsushima [mailto:satoru.matsushima@gmail.com]
Envoyé : mardi 13 août 2013 08:05
À : BOUCADAIR Mohamed OLNC/OLN
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Objet : Re: [Softwires] I-D Action: draft-ietf-softwire-map-08.txt

Hi Med, thank you for your comments.

When I did review the current version of unified cpe draft, I couldn't find any kind of stuff on which the map draft should depend so please point things out more specific to what unified cpe draft want map to be.

cheers,
--satoru

On Mon, Aug 12, 2013 at 10:53 PM, <mohamed.boucadair@orange.com<mailto:mohamed.boucadair@orange.com>> wrote:
Ole, all,

I have two comments about the new version:

* The document does not cite the unified CPE I-D. I think Senthil already raised this point to the authors, but it seems this was not taken into account. I suggest adding that document as a normative reference.

* I-D.ietf-softwire-map-dhcp is to be listed as an example to achieve provisioning (other means can be supported). This ref can be cited as informative and not normative one.

Cheers,
Med

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>A New Internet-Draft is available from the on-line Internet-Drafts
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> This draft is a work item of the Softwires Working Group of the IETF.
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>       Title           : Mapping of Address and Port with Encapsulation
>(MAP)
>       Author(s)       : Ole Troan
>                          Wojciech Dec
>                          Xing Li
>                          Congxiao Bao
>                          Satoru Matsushima
>                          Tetsuya Murakami
>                          Tom Taylor
>       Filename        : draft-ietf-softwire-map-08.txt
>       Pages           : 30
>       Date            : 2013-08-12
>
>Abstract:
>   This document describes a mechanism for transporting IPv4 packets
>   across an IPv6 network using IP encapsulation, and a generic
>   mechanism for mapping between IPv6 addresses and IPv4 addresses and
>   transport layer ports.
>
>
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